9.17 Lesson on Thesis Statement

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I had a horrid week because I couldn't get focused or used to the idea that I am back at work. However, I woke up early today and composed the following lesson in a half-hour. I feel pretty good about it, but would like some feedback. Tell me what you think of the lesson, I'd really appreciate it.

Topic: 9.17.10, Thesis Statement

Aim: How can we craft a compelling thesis statement?

Do Now: Interpret the following quote

“A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step.”
- Lao Tzu, Chinese Taoist Philosopher (600 – 531 BC)

1. What do you think Lao Tzu is saying in the above quote?
2. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

Mini-Lesson: Thesis Statement

A quality thesis statement:
• Directly answers the question asked of you
• Is your paper’s meaningful main idea
• Makes a claim that others might dispute
• Is a road map for your paper
• Includes a topic, a precise opinion, and reasoning

Thus…
Thesis = Main Idea + Supporting Details

The Main Idea (MI) Look at “Your Task” and create a thesis statement that ANSWERS the essay prompt
The Supporting Details (SD) List at least two supporting details that you will use to support your main idea

Activity: Compose a thesis statement for your essay

Essay Question:
What is one great injustice in the world, and how should it be addressed?

Sample Thesis

One great injustice in the world is the ban on same-sex marriage. Same-sex marriage should be legal in the eyes of the state because homosexuals should have the same rights as straight people and religious beliefs should be separate from those of the state.

Homework: Complete the 1st Draft of your essay
Essay Question:
What is one great injustice in the world, and how should it be addressed?
1. The essay should be at least four organized paragraphs
2. Underline your main idea and supporting details
3. Neatly written or typed